Hi Stefano, This is just my opinion from regular reader’s perspective and I’m not a writer. Please do not hate me 🙂I’m not judging you but just saying what I think about the writing approach. I like your photography. It feels pure and honest btw. The office view series really nice.
Regarding the article, it felt like fighting through fog of abstract terms and grand language. I think the article is trying very hard to sound profound. IMHO the core messages could be presented in a much simpler way.
I read your other article about Kertez fork. That one feels really clear and easy to read and I enjoyed it although I have different perspective on some topics you’ve touched.
Overall it’s a pleasure to read how people describe photography because for everyone it’s different.